A Comment/Review on Daffy’s “Absolute Submission”

Today, I’m taking a look at another of Daffy’s works. Having previously talked about Brought to Book and Open Invitation – both of which I enjoyed – I now turn my attentions to Absolute Submission. Synopsis below.

Jacob’s life changes after he visits a hypnodomme’s website in search of nude photos.

Okay, first things first. This is only part 1 so the story is naturally incomplete. However, it’s definitely off to a good start.

While some folks are on a quest for booty, Jacob wants boobs. The story begins with him becoming enamored by a trio of pictures featuring a lovely busty brunette. After some searching around, we come to know her as Ms Maryse. Her site is somewhat tacky and he’s only looking at it for the pics anyway when suddenly, the hypnodomme herself engages in conversation with him.

I admit I didn’t expect that happen out of the blue but I’m glad it did as it established quite an intriguing dynamic from the get-go. Labeled as a “fool” for not paying attention to disclaimers and whatnot, Jacob soon finds himself becoming ensnared by her without being entirely sure what is happening, and it’s time for her to teach him a lesson.

That’s pretty much where the chapter ends but I liked it a lot, especially Ms Maryse’s “voice”. She’s witty, clearly in control, and doesn’t suffer those that don’t respect her or those in her care. All good things in my book. She knows her place, and knows his as well, for Jacob is deluded enough to think women should be beneath him and we all know that’s not how things work, right?

I would have loved to see more of this today but I’ll wait like everybody else. I wonder exactly what she’ll do him to prove her point but given that the story carries with it a “masturbation” tag, it’s safe to say that will be a key component of it, although I doubt it will be a happy ending for him.

I will continue to follow this piece as more chapters are added. You should, too.

Thank you for reading.