A Comment/Review on Quiver’s “Chronicles of Succubus High – Chapter I”

We have a relatively new author to the scene receive the spotlight in this week’s commentary. I chose Quiver’s Chronicles of Succubus High. Synopsis below:

A series of erotic short stories set at Emery High, where a budding young succubus is wreaking havoc among the staff and students alike.

In the foreword, the author states “This story is the first installment of what I intend to be a series of interrelated but mostly independent short stories.” The first thing I want to note is how much I like the overall title and its double meaning for Succubus High can refer to the fact that there’s a Succubus in High school but also the ecstatic frenzy of being seduced by a Succubus, both of which are quite appropriate.

In this first chapter, we meet Tom Purcell, a disillusioned Math teacher who’s nearing her forties and pretty much hates what he does because none of his students – save for a few exceptions – actually care. As for our titular Succubus, she goes by Bree Stevens, a young athlete that, after arriving late at one of his classes, makes him a tantalizing offer. She wants him to watch her field hockey training that afternoon, promising him it will be worth his while, and it does.

Right from the start, her magnetism is palpable. Tom is drawn by her curves, her gorgeous eyes, and the way she moves her body. Not much for dating, the male teacher is still very much hormone-driven and Bree knows how to use that lust of his to her advantage. She easily gets inside his head through his cock and when his erection takes hold of him, he has no choice but to comply with her wishes and watch the training from afar.

What follows is a long and sexy long-distance seduction where Bree, after feigning an injury, poses for him and contorts herself in so many sexy ways leaving him no choice but to masturbate helplessly for her. When he finally cums, the sexual release from his offering feeds her and both rejoice. This whole sequence is quite sexy and very well-written but what I really enjoyed the most was the final revelation that Tom wasn’t the only one being played at that moment. The last lines of the tale, which I’ll replicate below are quite the climax to an already entertaining piece and yes, pun intended.

Twenty-seven classrooms faced east toward the field hockey field, thirteen of which were inhabited by male teachers. As she surveyed the building facade, she counted thirteen fresh white splatter patterns decorating the windows.

Bree Stevens smiled to herself. Good job boys, that’ll do nicely.

The primary reason why I went with this story today was the fact that I love supernatural pieces and this piece didn’t disappoint. It flows nicely, is quite sexy through and through and it ends on a high note. If Succubus were real, I wouldn’t mind meeting Bree at all. I really enjoyed it and I’m certainly intrigued to see what new tales will take place at Succubus High in the future. You should definitely check this one out if otherworldly sexiness rocks your boat.

Thank you for reading.