Bonus Story – Something Better

Bonus Stories are special features posted at the end of each month (depending on total pledges) and available to all patrons from the get-go. Bonus Stories are exclusive to my Patreon for the time being. While I may decide to release them publicly in the future, as I do with the regular Saturday Stories, for now, this is how things go.

The piece for the month of March is an evil FF MC story that’s about 5000 words long.

Nadine’s toxic ex-girlfriend, Alana, returns to her life, wanting to “fix things” between them. Will she succeed or not?

Read an excerpt below and find the rest of the tale here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/125625356

“I saw Alana yesterday.”
The words tumbled out of me like an involuntary confession, spilling into the cramped cafe where I’d agreed to meet Rachel. My voice was steady, but my hands betrayed me, trembling as I clutched the steaming coffee mug in front of me. Rachel’s wide blue eyes met mine, her brow furrowing in concern.
“What?” she blurted. “Oh, my God! Are you okay?”
I forced a laugh, the sound brittle and unconvincing. “I don’t know,” I muttered, reaching for the sugar packet I’d already stirred into my coffee. It was a nervous habit, one I thought I’d long since broken. But the moment Alana’s name crossed my lips, the past came flooding back with a ferocity that left me breathless.
Rachel leaned forward, her elbows resting on the scarred wooden table. “What happened? Did she… did she say anything to you?”
I shook my head, the memory of our encounter playing on repeat in my mind. Alana had been standing outside the bookstore downtown, her tall, lean frame impossible to miss even in the afternoon crowd. Her dark hair was shorter now, styled in a sharp, angular bob that framed her heart-shaped face. But it was her eyes that stopped me – those piercing green eyes that had once held me captive, eyes that had once promised me the world and then almost destroyed me.
For a moment, we just stared at each other, the air ripe with unspoken words. Then, without saying a single thing, she turned and disappeared into the swarm of people. It was as if she’d never been there at all.
Rachel’s voice pulled me back to the present. “Nadine, you’re scaring me. What’s going on?”
I sighed, running a hand through my hair. “She didn’t say anything. She just… looked at me. Like she could see right through me. Like nothing’s changed.”
“Has it?” Rachel’s question hung in the air, a challenge I wasn’t sure I was ready to face. Had anything changed? I’d spent years rebuilding my life, creating a version of myself that didn’t flinch at the mere mention of Alana’s name. And yet, yesterday, standing there on that sidewalk, it was as if everything had crumbled away in a heartbeat.

(…)

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The other Bonus Stories currently available for you to read are: 

• Assimilation – Janice goes spelunking on her own looking for a thrill and discovers something impossible underground. (sci-fi, horror, mind control) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/61908349
• The Villain Inside His Mind – Lucas is thinking of doing something stupid after Margo broke up with him but his stepbrother Jonathan comes to the rescue. (femdom, femdom hypnosis, addiction) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/63171955
• Jade’s Secret – Lucas discovers that his girlfriend Jade moonlights as a hypnodomme (femdom, femdom hypnosis, hypnotic amnesia) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/64532398
• Hungry Shadows – Ian is having strange nightmares that won’t go away but his girlfriend may have the solution: hypnotize him to sleep. (femdom, femdom hypnosis, “horror”, dreams) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/65817898.
• One Hell of a Bet – Two shape-shifting demons meet inside a mall and bet on who gets to claim a wealthy businessman’s soul first. (supernatural, demons, horror, mind control) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/67144162
• Second Date – Dr. Vanessa Madsen is kidnapped by a man who holds a grudge against her. Will she be able to escape her predicament? (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, kidnapping, revenge) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/68472760
• The Great Purpose – Two FBI agents investigate a case that may or may not involve a group of mind-controlling fembots. A parody of The X-Files (sci-fi, femdom, robotization, humor) –  https://www.patreon.com/posts/69847447
• Put a Ring on It – A man is hypnotized at a jewelry store while trying to buy a ring for his girlfriend. (gentle femdom, induction)
• So Good to Me – Regina helps her boyfriend Paul get in touch with his inspiration once again. (gentle femdom hypnosis, humiliation, brainwashing, writing) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/72695928
• Mandi – A journalist interviews a Pop star with an otherworldly secret. (gentle femdom, supernatural, Halloween) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/74035291
• Stand Tall – A woman helps you stay alive after a terrible accident… or does she? (gentle femdom, induction, enslavement) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/74035291
• Whipped Into Shape – A supernatural creature helps Mark achieve his goals whether he wants it or not. (gentle femdom, mind control, supernatural) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/79352088
• Visit Blue River – A virus that turns women into dominant vixens is unleashed in a small American town. (femdom, mind control, supernatural) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/80845944
• What the Fuck? – Jim has been sleepwalking lately and waking up in all sorts of random places. Does his next-door neighbor Tracy have anything to do with it? (femdom, hypnosis, mind control, amnesia) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/82292479
• Everything is Perfect – Lucy and Daniel(le) have a bit of hypnotic fun, (femdom, hypnosis, mind control, gentle femdom, feminization, humiliation) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/83852954
• Granny’s Gift – Deborah gets to live the life she always dreamed of thanks to a mesmerizing necklace. (femdom, mind control, supernatural) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/85386550
• Coming for Us All – David falls under the control of an extraterrestrial parasite who wants to take him to its queen. A sci-fi, horror mind control story – https://www.patreon.com/posts/86960358
• Kendra’s Bell – Dean has been acting weird lately. Did his new girlfriend do something to his mind? (femdom, hypnosis, mind control) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/88549365 
• Browsing – The Internet does strange things to Charles thanks to his wife’s hypnotic triggers. An expansion of a 55-word story from a while back. (femdom, hypnosis, mind control, humiliation, hypnosis, humor) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/88549365
• Great Party – Wendy is visited by a friend who wants her to go to a Halloween party with her, but Rachel is no longer the woman she used to know. (femdom, mind control, supernatural, Halloween, vampires) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/92025442
• Tell Me What You See – Maureen Roberts mesmerizes a disheartened barista, altering his perception of the world and himself. (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, hypnosis, gentle femdom) – https://www.patreon.com/posts/93824978
• What’s the Difference? – Dylan hears a strange carol outside his window, but what does it mean? – https://www.patreon.com/posts/95615829 (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, hypnosis, confusion)
• The New Year – Peter finds himself at the mercy of a hypnotic dominatrix on New Year’s Eve. What is she planning on doing to him? – https://www.patreon.com/posts/95616055 (femdom, mind control, enslavement, drugs)
• My Pet – Dr. Vanessa Madsen is interviewed by a famous blogger who reviewed a book she wrote and uses the opportunity to turn him into her pet – https://www.patreon.com/posts/97574732 (femdom, mind control, hypnosis, pet play)
• A Touch of Divine – A hypnotic woman teaches you the proper way to look at women’s boobs.An induction-like piece. – https://www.patreon.com/posts/99465328 – (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, boobnosis, induction)
• Breaking the Mold – Daniel has an unforgettable first-time experience with a professional dominatrix. – https://www.patreon.com/posts/101430839 (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, gentle femdom, BDSM)
• A Perfect Whisper – After receiving some traumatic news, Dr. Vanessa Madsen bonds with a beautiful singer at a bar and teaches her bully of a boss a mesmerizing and humiliating lesson. – https://www.patreon.com/posts/103359780 (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, punishment, music)
• Tamer of Souls – Dr. Vanessa Madsen enjoys her first date with a curious and well-spoken lawyer. A gentle femdom and foot worship piece – https://www.patreon.com/posts/105316115 (femdom femdom hypnosis, mind control, gentle femdom, foot worship)
• Bliss Was Hers – Pam has the perfect life and relationship and all thanks to the bracelet Hannah gave her. A mesmerizing, gentle femdom piece. – https://www.patreon.com/posts/107183622 (femdom femdom hypnosis, mind control, gentle femdom, lesbians)
• All The Selves We Leave Behind – Dr. Vanessa Madsen meets an old friend and flame at the theater and hypnotizes him to accept what the future holds for him. A gentle femdom story. – https://www.patreon.com/posts/109208873 (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, gentle femdom)
• Modern Fairytale – Eleanor meets Richard at the campus’ library and the two are connected by their curiosity about hypnosis. A gentle femdom tale. – https://www.patreon.com/posts/111168435
• It Was a Beautiful Dream – A bedridden man starts having strange dreams about his next-door neighbor. A gentle femdom tale. – https://www.patreon.com/posts/113090556 (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, gentle femdom)
• The Queens of Morville – On Halloween night, three powerful witches cast an irresistible spell on the unsuspecting population of Morville. – https://www.patreon.com/posts/115101825 (mind control, witches, supernatural)
• Meeting His Parents – It’s time for Jake to finally introduce his girlfriend Amy to his parents but she has a secret most people frown upon. – https://www.patreon.com/posts/117037503 (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, gentle femdom)
• Party Time – Dr. Vanessa Madsen in (gentle femdom mode) connects with a lonely man on New Year’s Eve – https://www.patreon.com/posts/119046270 (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, gentle femdom)
• An Hour’s Work – Alexandra Ryder deals with a group of goons who stole Top Secret files. – 
  https://www.patreon.com/posts/121227488 (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control)
• I Dream of Abigail – A man reminisces about the time he spent with a wonderful woman. A romantic, gentle femdom story.- https://www.patreon.com/posts/123344441 (femdom, femdom hypnosis, mind control, gentle femdom, love)

E-book versions of these tales are available for download on the Patreon feed as well.