A Comment/Review on Me-chan’s “Auto-Submit”

I’ve come to realize something about my tastes when it comes to reading other people’s works. They fluctuate. I love reading femdom hypnosis and mind control stories but, much like I don’t have a fixed style when it comes to my own creations, I don’t have a defined standard regarding what I end up enjoying in the long run or not. My moods vary and so do my appreciations.

Me-Chan’s Auto-Submit is a weird story for me. I already have a certain bias regarding his works so, to some degree, I always end up enjoying them. I like the idea of text hypnosis and find the premise of this one – a phone auto-fill being used as a trigger – very intriguing. Absolute control is also a fantasy of mine. For all purposes and intents, I should like everything about this one…

… but I don’t like Courtney. I can’t pinpoint why but I found myself not really enjoying her character and feeling more sorry for Beamen than thinking to myself “what a lucky guy!” This is even more bizarre considering the fact I’ve written about hypnotic bitches far worse than her. In the grand scheme of things, her actions throughout the story aren’t really so mean by comparison to some ideas of mine but…

It’s still an entertaining tale, no doubt about it and it’s possible I’ll look at it differently in the future. Today, the way things end up going, doesn’t feel like my cup of tea. Nonetheless. I commend Me-chan for his imagination as always. Thank you for reading.


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S. B.

Simple Being, Middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Domination, Hypnosis and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not.

2 Responses

  1. mechan11 says:

    Thanks for your comments S.B. I think I get what you mean by not liking Courtney; reading my story after the fact, I can’t completely like her myself.

    As I wrote it, I think the intrigue for me was for her to be a particular kind of mean and manipulative, a bit colder than I’m used to writing hypnotists. Oddly enough, I think that was the appeal of it to me, besides toying around with the auto response idea.

    I appreciate your honest feedback, and glad if you enjoyed any part of it.

    Thanks.

  2. S.B. says:

    You’re welcome. There’s really nothing wrong with “mean and manipulative” when it comes to pure fantasies but, some days, things don’t resonate with me that way.

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