A Comment/Review on Jake Elwoods’ “It Brings Out Her Eyes”
Last year, I read and commented on the same author’s School Foot Daze. Today, I try my luck at a new piece entitled It Brings Out Her Eyes. The synopsis posted at EMCSA goes like this:
Jared doesn’t understand why his friends Sammi and Beth are so obsessed with make-up.
Okay, first of all, I have to say I do enjoy make-up in women when done tastefully, meaning there are way too many exaggerations out there that I just can’t take seriously. I’d rather see a woman with no make-up at all than to suffer through the horror of excessive lipstick, mascara, gloss, and all those other things I don’t even know their names. However, with the right balance, a little bit of make-up is definitely a libido boost. We’re visual creatures for the most part so…
Okay, that being said, this is yet another simple piece where what’s going to happen is obvious from the get-go. At first, Jared complains about the price of the products they purchase but then his world view is quickly rewritten when the two women use make-up as a hypnotic focus point, entrancing him and enslaving him on the spot. Just like in School Foot Daze, I feel like everything happens just a little bit too quickly but there are some bright moments:
1 – The idea of staring at a woman applying lipstick is hot even if I don’t have a lipstick fetish;
2 – Aided masturbation to guide the subject more quickly into a state of trance is also hot;
3 – Conditioning the subject’s responses with the words “Yes, Mistress” is always effective, too. While titles aren’t really necessary to establish control, they can go a long way in creating that idea of inescapable dominance in the slave’s mind. Lady will always be my favorite though;
The combination of these three ideas adds to the tale for me despite the fact I would have preferred to “see” more once again. Short pieces such as this one are easy to read but don’t always go all the way through. I’m guilty of some of that in some of mine as well so this is not criticism, simply an observation. At least, Jared ends up where he belongs, a mindless puppet deprived of free will, that exists only to please their new owners. You know that’s one thing Spell… B-O-U-N-D‘s fantasy views approve, right?
All in all, a cute piece that I enjoyed going through. Perhaps, you will, too.
Thank you for reading.
