A Comment/Review on Jukebox’s “Umbrella”
Jukebox creates once again a very enjoyable Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control story even if the induction method seems a bit implausible. In Umbrella, a spinning umbrella is used to create a mind-warping pattern but how fast would an umbrella have to spin for that pattern to be created? Hmmm…
The synopsis of the piece reads like this:
Ryan gets into an argument with the forceful Miriam over an umbrella and winds up speechless. And mindless. And helpless…
Miriam is a rather brute character at first but softens up a bit once the hypnotic shenanigans take place. I thought the seduction part quite enticing, particularly the idea that anything with such a unique, distinctive pattern belongs to her. How can anyone resist such a devastating and compelling argument. I don’t think anyone can, and Ryan makes it very clear.
If there’s one thing I didn’t like about this piece is the overuse of “good boy” at the end stages. It’s actually a pet peeve of mine when it comes to names and such. I don’t like the expression “good boy” at all. I can tolerate it to some degree but when used so often in so few paragraphs, I get a little taken aback by the whole thing. However, if you love that kind of language especially when combined with hypnotic seduction then disregard my comment as it’s a personal thing, anyway.
Very good short story, as customary of Jukebox. Thank you for reading.
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