Cruel Rain

Day 18 of Spell… B-O-U-N-D’s Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control 55 Words Stories Challenge 2023,  Cruel Rain is an evil piece about an unusual punishment.


Cruel Rain

Willa’s latest hypnotic trigger was the cruelest punishment of all. For every drop of rain, George was to feel a hot needle piercing his flesh.
“Fuck this shit!” he banged his head against the bedroom wall. “Fuck!”
The flood outside gave him no time to breathe. He continued to writhe in pain until morning came.


How this story came to be

Today was rough. I slept poorly last night because the rain just kept pouring outside. We had a major storm hitting most of the region and my pets were scared. I ended up staying awake for longer than I should have to calm them down and paid the price in the morning. I’m still tired as I type this which is why I’m heading to bed soon.

Anyway, all the ideas I had during my lunch break revolved around rain and this was the one I chose to go with. It really is a cruel trigger, isn’t it?



I hope you had fun. Until tomorrow.


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S. B.

Simple Being, Middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Domination, Hypnosis and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not.

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