I Can’t…

Day 130 of Spell… B-O-U-N-D’s Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control 55 Words Stories Challenge 2023,  I Can’t… is a piece about mesmeric overload in response to a suggestion by Ella Enchanting.


I Can’t…

Dylan bit his nails. Her eyes, her voice, the tight latex outfit… it was a sensory overload!
“I can’t do this, Tamsin!” he gasped.
“You promised Elise you’d watch her hypnosis video…” she replied.
“I know, but what if I lose my mind?”
“Then, the fun begins…”
One minute down, only fifty-four more to go.


How this story came to be

As you know, I do take suggestions for this challenge and, every now and then, a few do come. Yesterday, I received one through this site’s suggestions form (see below). It came from Ella Enchanting who wrote the following:

Overload! Esp- Mesmeric overload

I decided to go for it with this simple yet humorous self-referential plot. You may have noticed that the hypnotic video that’s making Dylan slowly lose his composure is fifty-five minutes long and this challenge comprises fifty-five words stories, so…

Anyway, thank you for the suggestion. They’re always appreciated. 

For anyone reading this, if you wish to know more about Ella, be sure to follow this link. She calls herself a hypnotist, writer, presenter, and knower of some of the things. You can find out what that all means by checking her work. 



I hope you had fun. Until tomorrow.


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S. B.

Simple Being, Middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Domination, Hypnosis and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not.

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