Not Very Good at This

Day 41 of Spell… B-O-U-N-D’s Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control 55 Words Stories Challenge 2024,  Not Very Good at This is a humorous/horrific piece about a mad scientist.


Not Very Good at This

“I’m not very good at this…” Ava began.
“Okay…” Trevor nodded
“… so if you wake up tomorrow missing a limb, don’t be alarmed.”
“What? No! You’re not really a mad scientist. You’re just pretending to be one.”
“Funny… this recording of my voice says otherwise.”
The entranced hypnodomme reached for a bloody saw and grinned.


How this story came to be

This piece sprung from the following idea: what if a hypnodomme was entranced by one of her fantasy recordings? How would her personality change because of it? I played with a couple of concepts in my head and liked this humor/horror combo so much I decided to go with it. You better start running or she’s coming after you, too.



I hope you had fun. Until tomorrow.


Become a Patron!

S. B.

Simple Being, Middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Domination, Hypnosis and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.

Mesmerizing content is waiting for you.

Flash fiction, short stories, photo stories, poetry, reviews... all waiting for you at a click of a button or a powerful snap of her hypnotic fingers sending you deeper and deeper into mindless bliss. Don't resist. Subscribe to our mailing list today and receive two free e-books.

Our mailing list is handled by Mailchimp. Your e-mail will be added to their database for the purpose of sending you information regarding this website. We will not share your data with anyone else. You can unsubscribe at any time by clicking at the bottom of any e-mail you receive from us.