Too Much

Day 206 of Spell… B-O-U-N-D’s Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control 55 Words Stories Challenge 2023,  Too Much is a dark revenge piece.


Too Much

The plane crashed time and time again, and Hank was always in the thick of it, his face melting off like wax.
“Jesus, Claire! Don’t you think that’s too much?” Alicia asked.
“No. He fucked you, I fuck him. Let’s go.”
The femdom hypnotist grabbed her sister’s hand, leaving the rapist trapped inside his mind.


How this story came to be

I did not have a good day today. I could say I did, but why lie? I’m not okay, and I’m not going to be okay for a very long time. I’m in a lot of mental pain and that affects the things that come to mind. I had bad thoughts all day and all my story ideas were far from pleasing. Believe it or not, of all the concepts I entertained, this was the least troublesome despite how dark it is.

Today was not a good day and I imagine tomorrow will be worse as it will be a week since my baby girl is gone. I’m not looking forward to it.



I hope you had fun. Until tomorrow.


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S. B.

Simple Being, Middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Domination, Hypnosis and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not.

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