What Did I Do Wrong?

Day 5 of Spell… B-O-U-N-D’s Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control 55 Words Stories Challenge 2024,  What Did I Do Wrong? is a piece about an angry woman and a confused man.


What Did I Do Wrong?

Maria wasn’t talking to Raoul. He didn’t know why.
“What did I do wrong?” he asked.
“You refused to let me hypnotize you yesterday,” she grumbled.
“What? No! You can do it whenever you want!”
“Seriously?”
“Yes!”
“Good.”
Maria touched his forehead and the world went dark. Don’t ask about the cock in his mouth.


How this story came to be

When you’re a people pleaser, you don’t want others to get upset. That’s even more clear if you’re involved in a relationship with someone else. When this snippet came to me, I envisioned Raoul as a people pleaser slowly being turned into a slave by his girlfriend/wife. If she can hypnotize him at will then she can also change his personality at will, too. Don’t ask too many questions or she may change the way you think as well.



I hope you had fun. Until tomorrow.


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S. B.

Simple Being, Middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Domination, Hypnosis and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not.

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