What Have I Done Wrong?

Day 49 of Spell… B-O-U-N-D’s Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control 55 Words Stories Challenge 2023,  What Have I Done Wrong? is a humorous piece about trying to hypnotize someone.


What Have I Done Wrong?

Camilla entered her apartment and laughed.
“What are you doing with my pendant, Mandy?” she asked.
“Hmmm, hypnotizing your neighbor?” her younger sister replied. “You do it all the time.”
“Yes, but I know my stuff, unlike you.”
“Huh? What have I done wrong?”
“You’re naked. You entranced yourself.”
“Oops…” Amanda hid behind the sofa.


How this story came to be

This is another late-night impromptu. I had a very busy and not particularly pleasant day. I’m tired and a bit grumpy so I decided to write something light to feel better before going to bed and this was what came to me. Sometimes, I wonder if hypnotists entrance themselves just for fun, or have done so accidentally while trying to play with others. I guess that was what was on my mind when the idea came to me.



I hope you had fun. Until tomorrow.


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Simple Being, Middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Domination, Hypnosis and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not.

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