White Ashes

Day 261 of Spell… B-O-U-N-D’s Femdom Hypnosis and Mind Control 55 Words Stories Challenge 2024, White Ashes is a piece about hypnosis and perception.


White Ashes

Terence’s courtyard was covered in ash. He was pissed.
“Look at this mess! Damn it!”
“It’s horrible but it could be worse,” Paula said.
“Worse how?”
“Imagine it was semen instead.”
“You’re right, that would be worse… especially the cleaning part.”
“Better get started then…” She touched his forehead.
No rest for the brainwashed tongue.


How this story came to be

My country is burning. Forest fires have been raging through Portugal in the last couple of days. While the nearest active fire is at least 50 miles away, the wind has been carrying ash all over the place. Yes, when I woke up this morning, I had my courtyard covered in ash. I already cleaned it but I suspect tomorrow will be the same. We’ll see.

Anyway, this idea came to me earlier today during my lunch break. I looked outside, saw the sickly yellow-orange sky and ash particles floating in the air, and wrote this. It’s quite the dirty piece but only if you’re paying attention. Well, are you? 



I hope you had fun. Until tomorrow.


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S. B.

Simple Being, Middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Domination, Hypnosis and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not.

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